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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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First words: "What am I, where am I ? . . . why ?"
"Where... Where am I?"
... That's an awesome post. Seriously and positively motivating - your style's interesting, and your narration appeals to me a lot.
I did end up using "Where am I?" as Ann's first words. I think your post was the one which made me decide on this.
Huge thanks to you!
The third page is up, [HERE]!
I've come to love the use of first-person narration. It really lets you get inside the character's head. Understand their thoughts even better than in third-person.
This isn't entirely my writing style. I tweaked it a bit to show how the newly-animated Ann thinks, as her thoughts coalesce from the initial basic instinctual thoughts into coherent phrases and ideas. My inspiration for that initial part was some story on dA written from the perspective of an Enderman from Minecraft; in other words, a creature more driven by simple instinct. I think I'll incorporate it fully into my style for intense moments where drawn-out thought is a time-consuming luxury the characters can't afford. Chase scenes or fight scenes, maybe. *sigh* It's too bad I don't have much to show of my style to begin with at this moment.
Really, I was just curious as to what goes through the mind of an inanimate object brought to life for the first time. Even though everyone else responded how they would react to waking up as Ann, I decided to do something totally different. I would've added how I'd react, but decided not to. What can I say? I'm unique.
I also left the surroundings vague, because we don't know what the place looks like yet (or haven't been taken to the proper setting yet).
Heh. Listen to me. My description of what I was thinking when writing that is taking up more space than the writing itself. I feel like a writer. ...I mean a better writer, with more stuff than just a paragraph and a journal.
This post is getting kinda long. Guess I should end it and read page 3 now. Heheh. *click*
I hope you’ll have occasions to use your style
I’m a Minecrafter too, so, I know what Endermen are~
Enjoy!
Oh, another body-swapee~
Nice idea
The third page is up, [HERE]!
Yeah, REALLY~
The third page is up, [HERE]!